Excerpts from “Potluck,” a novel by Jack Rudloe

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Excerpts from “Potluck”

a novel by Jack Rudloe

Our tale starts…

Captain Preston Barfield was trying to keep awake. With heavy eyes he looked out over the distant lights of other shrimp boats working in the Gulf of Mexico. He wiggled his shoulders and stretched his legs. The clock on the wheelhouse wall of the Lady Mary read 2 a.m. In another fifteen minutes it would be time to wake up Charlie, his deckhand, and get the nets on board.

Preston was a bear of a man. At more than six foot four inches, his head almost touched the cabin’s ceiling. His stubble-rugged face was weathered by sun and sea far beyond that of a forty-year-old man. Listening to the north wind moaning and rattling the windows, he flipped on the radar, which started the T-shaped beacon on the cabin roof revolving. Three white electronic blips flashed back at him, leaving comet-like tracings on the luminous green radar screen. They faded away until the revolving line picked them up and they flashed again.

Each blip within the concentric circles represented another shrimp boat, roughly sixty-eight feet long, the size of his own Lady Mary. The captain’s callused fingers adjusted the knob, extending the range to sixteen miles. He wondered if there were any more fools besides himself out there in the wintry off-season trying to scrape up enough shrimp to pay for fuel and groceries.

Suddenly, there was a large flash at the edge of the screen. Strange, he thought. It looked like a tug pushing a string of barges, but they were outside their normal shipping routes. Again it flashed, and this time he was certain it was a ship, roughly three hundred feet long. And in that remote North Florida coastal area, where there was no commerce, that was even stranger.

Then he understood. His eyes grew wide. Another blip about the size of a shrimp boat appeared on the screen. He watched the small blip closing rapidly until it merged with the ship’s and became one big blip. […]

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Much later on, a different sort of trawler being run by Barfield is boarded by Marine Patrol officers

Miller looked at the splintered doors, the tattered webbing and the stretched chains encrusted with limestone mud. That part of Preston’s story sounded authentic enough, but there was something that bothered him. He had never seen Barfield looking so haggard and worn, usually even in the midst of the grueling work, he managed to shave now and then.

And then there was that hippie deckhand with the ponytail. He was too polished, suntanned, his body muscular and athletic, his jeans weren’t faded and eaten with shrimp acid enough. Not like the rags good ol’ Charlie wore.

“Oh crap,” Miller thought with a sinking feeling. “We got our mother ship.” And it wasn’t being run by some mangy low-life with a gold earring and an eye-patch who would slit someone’s throat. It was his friend.

But the idea of storming on board, finding a load of pot or residue, drawing his gun and handcuffing Preston Barfield made him physically sick. There was no prestige in making a bust like that, and Ted Miller liked to feel good about himself. His neighbors would despise him for it, his wife would be upset, and for what?

Right now, if he were on a jury, he’d have a hard time convicting any commercial fisherman and sending him up for years under Florida’s mandatory drug sentencing law. The new fisheries regulations made it almost impossible for fishermen to scratch out a living now. Shrimpers were a dying breed and would soon be replaced by retirees in condominiums and yachts. Ted Miller thought the new laws were garbage.

Every day he’d have to look at Mary Barfield, struggling along with a child to feed, living on food stamps. He’d heard about the cussing match Preston had with G.W. at the oyster house a month ago. Barfield was a proud man, and so was his wife. He’d have to watch their kid growing up in rags.

Screw it, he thought bitterly. Goddamn it, screw it. I’m not gonna do it. If this authoritarian piss-wad next to me doesn’t have the sense to bust him, why should I?

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